Ric-Olzow's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Her Smile]

Smooth!

I love the mood this song creates!

I also like how, evn with it being progressive, you dont feel like you're waiting for the song to start. It eases in well and keeps your attention.

Nicely done!

BuggMusic responds:

thank you kindly :)

[So Smooth (Preview)]

WHERES THE CHORUS? O.o

It's sounds awesome man, but If you gonna rap you need to have some sort of chorus, usually artists and rappers put a chorus at 1:00, you can go shorter or longer, as long as it works. Granted its the demo, but its long enough to include at least a BIT of the chorus.

9/10 5/5

Dragproductions responds:

I would agree with you on that one but,
have you ever heard a Milli By Lil Wayne?
Through that whole entire song there was no chorus and im trying to make mine kinda the same way he did.
Thanks for the review bro.